Wip: pointillism!

Well, here is my personal opinion on this drawing.

Well, for the vision part, the pointillism goes good with this particular drawing, it appears as if it were small feathers, and the blue highlight on the beak helps blend it with the image. The shading and the hues of blue on this are excellent, giving the vision on this a 5.

Now, for the originality, I have seen quite a few bluebirds, but none in pointillism, and not in this particular pose. I have never seen a picture in just one "color" if you understand what I am saying. I am giving the originality on this a 4.5.

I have never tried pointillism myself, but I envision it as hard, just so many hours of dotting, and dotting, and so on so forth. I like the technique in this, it gives it a textured feel, giving it a 5.

The impact on this is not amazing, is it is not finished, but for now it is a beautiful piece overall, and the blue reminds me of lots of things, the ocean and such, giving the impact a 4.